Grand Prix Rock N’ Racing Review – Editor

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Hey guys another review I edited here. Once again I was supplied with a piece and asked to re write it so that the sentence structure had a better sense of flow, the grammar was more punctual, and points were clearer and made more sense. Did my best re writing this one, hopefully you like it.

http://www.oneupgaming.co.uk/#!grand-prix-rock-n-racing-review/rijnx

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